Describing+the+Big+Walk

= = = The Tramway Walk - Descriptions by Room 1 Writers = ** We are learning to use describing words so the reader can imagine what we saw or heard. Can you pick out the describing words these writers have used? Some of them are underlined....can you find any more? Once you have read these descriptions check out this website for some more... [|cool writing games] or try.... ** [|**what am I** ?] Click on the '__When__' button and choose a riddle to figure out from the description given. 


__Our Writing__

** The Path. The rock were __slippery__ and bumpy and loose too. Some of us tripped over. It rained and then it was sunny. When the rain moved away, it was sunny. ** By Amberley. Edited by Amberley (with a little help).

The River.  I see some __white__ rocks and I see my mum holding my bag for me and I see a little bit of flax and I see some grass and a little bit of white grass and heaps of bits of __green__ grass. I see some water, blue water and __dark red__ water and light red water and I see some punga trees.

By Tyne. Edited by Tyne.  The river was __sparkly like a crystal__, with a fast going current and with __big__ giant rocks. Written by Sam. Edited by Sam.

The Path. The path has __wet__ rocks and wet wood on the track and mud and leaves when it rains. Written By Curtis. Edited by Curtis

The Waterfall. The waterfall has brown rocks and it has skinny red things there at the top of the waterfall.  Written by Ethan P. Edited by Ethan P.

It was scary walking in the paddock with the bulls. Told by Nathan.

Written by Bess.
Here are some slides of the special walk Room 1 did with the school, in our forest. media type="file" key="First Steps in the forest.mov"





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